vonDark's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[I can't see]

hmmmm...

I just watched this and I noticed some few things that you should fix on your next movie. When he falls down the movement should get quicker and quicker now it was like that it had lower gravity or something. And there's something weird when the guy pops, you should make him pop more and on the first frames move him more up and move him move smaller and smaller gaps then he falls down. This could be done with easing or just using onion skinning on two frames at the time. Hope that helps.
Other than that it's goood.

bakerrr responds:

thanks for the advice, but i dont really understand what your saying, about him popping. Can you explain better on MSN? U have my email already

[Skate Three]

good

It's nice animation and all, but what's up with the shifty flips, they just seem to unrealistic, I thought the guy was doing a frontside flip, then suddenly he turned the other way.

Nice music too.

melkmatic responds:

That is what shifty flips do though, turn one way then the other, loads of people do them, they're not unrealistic, I'm a bit confused... Thanks for the good review though.

I recognise you as the author of 'I love skateboarding' by the way, props for making the front page.

[Unlucky Dave]

<3

wee, you used my music

UncleStevie responds:

Yup, and it's a very good piece aswell :)

[F--B--F F--U--N 1(FULL)]

Why?

It looks like you used some time on this, but why did you use so much time on something like this. It looks like you have some fbf skills, so why don't you make a movie with a plot?

BLAHBLAHA responds:

I already started on my new fbf movie and it has a plot. Thanks for a good review!

P.S. It didn't take me that long to make this.

[Scallies V Goths Ep.3]

Stakkars Oslo

Poor oslo, have a nice day, lol.

Flecky responds:

I've never been to Oslo so sorry if the mountains weren't quite the right shade of grey.

[sKaTe BoRdInG MoViE #1]

Not good

You should animate the people more, not just tween 'em. Make it a fbf movie instead.
And that music was terrible, put in some punk music, and remember to stream the music.

45288 responds:

i didnt tween 'em i animated them. frame by frame animation

[Random ep 2]

Hallo

Hallo din svenskemann!

Old-Erkefiende responds:

exakt!

[Chinchilla XZ]

Not that bad

It was Ok.
But, you should have more animating, mot just two images that you move around.
You could do like joel Veitch does, look at his web-site www.rathergood.com

StupidHumorKing responds:

Gimme a break man, it was my first flash, dont expect miracles! lol. Yes I have checked out www.rathergood.com before and its fucked up, in a good laughable way!

[The Train and the MooMoo]

You ripped weebl!

That totally looked like one cow that weebl made for a commersial.

www.sumo-dojo.com

LimpNoodle responds:

Thats it! I know the anchor ad, no i seen dem and was like that was defo made in flash! but it was weeble! damn! small world!

[gnomez]

hahahaha!

That was really cool!
All my 5 are belong to this.

mr-wheatley responds:

thanks!